Sunday, September 12, 2010

Showing vs. Telling

1. The room was a mess.
- It was a disaster of a room. There were heaps of inanimate objects strewn across the room. I couldn't decipher what was what. The room was an eye sore to look at.

2. I was surprised.
- I was in utter shock. My eyes popped right out of my eyes, and my mouth was open as wide as the sea is big. I was at a lost for words.

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